For your macro photo, the focal point is clearly defined by the blurred, grey background. The composition is well thought out. The background isn't busy, which brings all the focus to the subject. I also appreciate the lighting from the background that brings out the detail in the subject.
Serena- In your portrait your subject looks very natural and relaxed, like they were not aware that a photo was being taking. Your subject would be much easier to concentrate on and more defined if there was less distractions in the background. So possibly in the future a different angle or a different place on the track. If you crop the top of your photo closer to your subjects head it will leave the eyes less room to wander and they will be more focused on the subject. The lines on the track are very well used they are bold and they direct your eyes to you’re subject, and makes you are subject stand out more. The contrast between the parents and the track help make the subjects stand out.
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ReplyDeleteFor your macro photo, the focal point is clearly defined by the blurred, grey background. The composition is well thought out. The background isn't busy, which brings all the focus to the subject. I also appreciate the lighting from the background that brings out the detail in the subject.
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ReplyDeleteIn your portrait your subject looks very natural and relaxed, like they were not aware that a photo was being taking. Your subject would be much easier to concentrate on and more defined if there was less distractions in the background. So possibly in the future a different angle or a different place on the track. If you crop the top of your photo closer to your subjects head it will leave the eyes less room to wander and they will be more focused on the subject. The lines on the track are very well used they are bold and they direct your eyes to you’re subject, and makes you are subject stand out more. The contrast between the parents and the track help make the subjects stand out.